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Gray, Tiara Gray, Tiara Gray, Tiara Nam: Tiara Gray
Contact Info: ej8404@wayne.edu
Major: Nursing
Project One
Condoms http://www.gagful.com/uploads/2011_11/1320081155_different_brands_of_condom_gag.jpg
secret deodorant http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xnuxWN7tIUA&feature=related
coca-cola or pepsi http://www.neatorama.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/03/Coke-vs-Pepsi-500x375.jpg
Into P1
Which do you prefer Trojan, Lifestyles, or Durex condoms? There are different kinds, different styles, different colors, and different sizes in these brands. But if these brands of condoms had sponsors which would you choose. Would it be McDonalds- We love to see you smile, Bounty- the quicker picker-upper, Chevy Truck- like a rock, Nike- just do it, Energizer- It keeps going and going, or KFC- finger-lickin' good. I wouldn't choose a sponsor I would just stick to Trojan because i wouldn't know if they were safe and if they work correctly.With this ad ill be talking about the different types, styles and colors of condoms.
gray p1 fd
Project Two
Gray p2 rd
Gray P2 RD (this wiki page has your rough draft and my comments - papers should be posted on wiki pages like this).
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Project Three
Gray p3 rd
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Project Four
Comments (6)
Abigail Heiniger said
at 11:35 pm on Jan 20, 2012
THe first intro is absolutely hilarious! However, neither of these intros/thesis statements set up the paper to do a rhetorical analysis. They almost set up an experiment or an investigation into advertising (which would be very interesting).
For example, you could do a CATEGORICAL analysis of condom ads. You could compare (and contrast) the rhetorical strategies of Trojan, Lifestyle, and Durex ads. Do they all use sex appeal (as products associated with sex)? Do any use celebrity appeal (ethos), or logic? What about emotions? How do music and lighting work in the ads? And how does all this allow the ads to MARKET their condoms?
If you have any questions, I would be happy to talk with you further. It seems like these intros are really just a shade away from rhetorical analysis - it won't be hard to shift it to where it needs to be.
Abigail Heiniger said
at 11:02 pm on Jan 28, 2012
Where is your rough draft? Let me know if I missed it. I do not see it posted here.
Tiara Gray said
at 12:05 pm on Feb 13, 2012
I haven't posted my outline yet but i know which article i want to do "Is Google Making Us Stupid?"
It seems like a newer article to talk about.
research- logos, pathos, ethos
Abigail Heiniger said
at 11:15 am on Mar 9, 2012
Where is your Project Three Rough Draft? Let me know if I missed it!
Abigail Heiniger said
at 11:52 pm on Apr 10, 2012
Where is your Project Four Rough Draft? Let me know if I missed it!
Abigail Heiniger said
at 7:47 pm on Apr 24, 2012
I do not see your Project Four. Let me know if I missed it.
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